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7/21/2025 17 Comments

Who Are We? - Luciana Fisher

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Who are we, if not a collection of our memories?
I am the baby on the window,
The girl on the floor,
The teen who could always love more--
Full of hopes and dreams,
The woman who lost a child,
Yet still learned how to sing.

I am a multitude of me(s) and her(s),
Confounded into one:
I am— the one
or was,
Just a second ago;

Now I am already someone new.
For now, I think of things I did not consider minutes before.
Am I still me? Yes. Yet, I am not.

Who are we, if not a collection of our thoughts
And memories?
Do you recall?
I think I remember me--
But who was I then,
When I was the girl on the floor?
I know she wanted more--
I still do, and so does she.
By allowing myself to remember her,
I get to learn more about me.

The question remains: who are we,
Without our past lives, selves, and memories?
I remember now. I remember her!
I close my eyes and see her clearly—her, me--
"Hello, little one, come here, child. I’ve finally found you, the truest form of me!"
By protecting her memory and reigniting her hopes and dreams,
I finally rescued me.

Who Are We?
We are a collection of thoughts and ancestral memories,
Yearning to be set free!


Luciana Fisher is a Brazilian-American immigrant, rising poet, and passionate writer currently pursuing a BA in Social Sciences with a concentration in Economics at New York University (NYU). After graduating with honors from BMCC and earning an associate's degree in the Arts of Economics, she reignited her passion for poetry, which helped her in overcoming challenges after a cancer diagnosis. Her writing explores themes of identity, vulnerability, personal growth, and the intricacies of communication through poetry and prose.
17 Comments
Gabrielle Lisk
7/22/2025 08:38:29 pm

What a gorgeous poem, it’s making me tear up a bit!! I relate so much to the sentiment of that little girl inside and feeling softness for yourself and for her both. Beautiful work! I love the emotion behind it

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7/22/2025 08:46:37 pm

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment!

In this poem, I explore the shifting layers of identity, asking who we are beyond the memories and moments that define us. Writing "Who Are We?" was a journey into reconnecting with the past selves we sometimes lose but never truly leave behind. Each line reflects the process of finding strength in vulnerability and honoring the fragments of our history that make us whole. Ultimately, it’s about the quiet but persistent yearning we all feel to understand ourselves and to finally, perhaps, set that self-free to move forward. I think we would all be much happier if we rescued or got in touch with our inner child more often!

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Samantha Felicio
7/22/2025 08:46:44 pm

Such a soft touching bunch of beatiful words, Love it!

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7/22/2025 08:50:07 pm

Thank you, Samatha!

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7/22/2025 08:48:49 pm

Neste poema, exploro as camadas mutáveis da identidade, questionando quem somos além das memórias e dos momentos que nos moldam. Escrever “Quem Somos Nós?” foi uma jornada de reconexão com os eus do passado que às vezes perdemos, mas nunca deixamos realmente para trás. Cada verso reflete o processo de encontrar força na vulnerabilidade e de honrar os fragmentos da nossa história que nos tornam inteiros. No fim das contas, trata-se desse anseio silencioso — mas persistente — que todos sentimos de compreender quem somos e, talvez, finalmente libertar esse eu para seguir em frente. Acho que todos seríamos muito mais felizes se resgatássemos ou nos reconectássemos com a nossa criança interior com mais frequência!

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Lourdes
7/24/2025 08:57:54 pm

Muito interessante e potente essa perspectiva de se reconectar com o passado para se reconhecer através dele.Amei! Esse poema vem ao encontro do meu momento atual no meu processo de autodescobertade querer resgatar a mim mesma, de querer saber quem sou eu de verdade, sem máscaras. Talvez, buscar essas memórias, possa ser um recurso, um bom caminho até o Si mesmo.

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7/22/2025 08:51:10 pm

En este poema, exploro las capas cambiantes de la identidad, preguntando quiénes somos más allá de los recuerdos y momentos que nos definen. Escribir “¿Quiénes Somos?” fue un viaje para reconectarme con esos yo del pasado que a veces perdemos, pero que en realidad nunca dejamos atrás. Cada verso refleja el proceso de encontrar fuerza en la vulnerabilidad y de honrar los fragmentos de nuestra historia que nos hacen completos. En última instancia, se trata de ese anhelo silencioso pero persistente que todos sentimos por entendernos a nosotros mismos y, tal vez, finalmente liberar ese yo para poder avanzar. ¡Creo que todos seríamos mucho más felices si rescatáramos o nos conectáramos con nuestro niño interior más a menudo!

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7/22/2025 08:52:25 pm

Dans ce poème, j’explore les couches changeantes de l’identité, en me demandant qui nous sommes au-delà des souvenirs et des instants qui nous définissent. Écrire « Qui sommes-nous ? » a été un voyage pour me reconnecter avec les versions passées de moi-même — celles qu’on perd parfois en chemin, mais qu’on ne quitte jamais tout à fait. Chaque ligne reflète ce processus de trouver de la force dans la vulnérabilité, et d’honorer les fragments de notre histoire qui nous rendent entiers. Au fond, c’est une réflexion sur ce désir silencieux mais persistant que nous avons tous : celui de nous comprendre… et peut-être, enfin, de libérer cet être intérieur pour aller de l’avant. Je crois que nous serions tous beaucoup plus heureux si nous sauvions ou retrouvions plus souvent notre enfant intérieur.








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7/22/2025 08:53:18 pm

في هذه القصيدة، أستكشف الطبقات المتغيرة للهوية، وأتساءل: من نكون حقًا، بعيدًا عن الذكريات واللحظات التي تُعرّفنا؟
كتابة "من نحن؟" كانت رحلة نحو إعادة الاتصال بالذوات الماضية التي قد نضيعها أحيانًا، لكنها لا تتركنا أبدًا تمامًا.
كل سطر يعكس عملية العثور على القوة في الهشاشة، وتكريم شظايا تاريخنا التي تُكملنا.
في النهاية، تتحدث القصيدة عن ذلك الشوق الهادئ — لكنه مستمر — الذي نشعر به جميعًا لفهم أنفسنا، ولإطلاق سراح هذا "الذات" حتى تتحرر وتمضي قدمًا.
أعتقد أننا جميعًا سنكون أكثر سعادة لو أنقذنا أو تواصلنا مع الطفل الذي بداخلنا أكثر من مرة!

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Jessica Martinez
7/23/2025 03:27:38 am

A beautiful soul reflection on identity, memory, and healing. This poem captures the power of embracing our past selves to find wholeness in the present. Truly moving.

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Gary B. Dean
7/23/2025 03:47:56 am

Luciana you have a gift for making the essential seem obvious, and effortless. "I am-the one/or was" captures how quickly we change, how continuously we grow. It reminds me that Dan Barker said, "time is stationary...it is consciousness that is flowing." We expand but can always look back to who we were. I love this poem.

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Susan Brumel
7/23/2025 04:59:40 am

Insightful, introspective, and at the same time so relatable. Beautiful piece by one of my favorite poets.

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Jake Borchardt
7/23/2025 12:21:42 pm

I love the reverence you share in remembering our innocence and brightness before becoming part of a world that has a way to destroy the vibrance of innocence, demanding we become something we do come to realize, we never were!

Brilliant capture!

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Marta Roszkowski
7/23/2025 03:35:12 pm

Beautiful! We are so many different versions woven together!

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Georgia Coelho
7/24/2025 11:22:37 am

Beautiful Lu!!

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robert price link
7/24/2025 03:52:12 pm

Why contain our multitudes when we could set them Freeeeeee

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Marco Souza
7/25/2025 03:12:37 am

Such a beautiful poem! I loved this reflection on identity!

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